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Summary

Rewrites the prose in src/site documentation according to ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English.

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  • Descriptive text uses simple present tense, max 25 words per sentence.
  • Procedural steps use the imperative mood, max 20 words per sentence.
  • Conditions come before commands ("If ...", then the command).
  • Removed contractions, "-ing" verb forms, semicolons, and the modals should/would/may/might/could.
  • Removed filler words (simply, strongly recommended, take advantage of).
  • Replaced "e.g." with "for example".

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Code blocks, identifiers, CLI commands, file paths, links, product names, and license headers are unchanged.

Files: 2 (src/site/markdown/index.md, src/site/xdoc/download.xml.vm).

Documentation only; no functional changes.

elharo and others added 6 commits August 4, 2026 10:22
Update the index and download pages to comply with ASD-STE100.  Use
short sentences, approved modals (can, will, must), and the imperative
for instructions.  Remove filler words, semicolons, present perfect, and
-ing verb forms.  Code samples, identifiers, and links are unchanged.
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elharo requested a review from slawekjaranowski August 4, 2026 10:47
@elharo elharo added the documentation Improvements or additions to documentation label Aug 4, 2026
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src/site/markdown/index.md:44: The default user settings path is incomplete. The implementation (AetherUtils.findUserSettings()) checks ${user.home}/.ant/settings.xml first, then falls back to
${user.home}/.m2/settings.xml. This precedence should probably be documented.

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The concern about settings precedence is valid. However, that feels like it needs a separate and deliberate PR that shouldn't be hidden inside a style rewrite. I'm going to file an issue for that.

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